I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Ms Aireen.
Wednesday, 30 October 2013
Tsunami Narritive
Start here:Once, it was a bright and sunny day in the town of bangkok.Where it was calm and nobody was yelling or anything but with no warning there was a big BANG!.It was a EARTHQUAKE!!Everybody felt it but that was not the end.With no warning there was huge wave coming straight for the city. “Ahhhhhh,RUUUUUUUUUU NNNNNN I want my mummy” Cried a little child in Anger.
Men and women praying in front of the wave for Persitan the God of the see to help them in there time of pain.
But it was too late...They have been swept away from their loving city.No survivors.Just a pool of water surounding the city that once was calm and collected but now was just a pool of lives lost.Anger why must this happen to this poor city?
The End!
Tuesday, 29 October 2013
Friday, 25 October 2013
Amazing Win by Petra
Amazing Win
Once,I was in my Gazebo.Trembling in fear,People screaming in excitement,But that was just a background.Watching one of the teachers with two blocks in her hands ready to crash them together.Children,In lines waiting for the sound of the two blocks smashed together which will let them go free.SMASH!
Off the children go Sprinting to be the one to win.
The children at the front get tired and they slow down.
The tiny little kid at the back Sprinted to the front of the fast people and
BOOM! He has won.Kids silent and with excitement everybody started to clap.
A tornado,Drifting in my stomach round and round and my stomach goes BANG! When I hear one of the teacher’s calling “ALL THE 9 YEAR OLD GIRLS TO THE STARTING LINE”.Shaking,It was hard to walk.Lining up
at the starting line.Staring at the finish line.I could hear my heart beating as fast as a bee.Bang!,Off we go,Sprinting as fast as the wind.
This race is different everybody is sprinting but nobody was slowing down in the front but I came fifth place.I wait for the finals
to finish and it was time for the points to see witch house won.
“BENGHAZI -867 TUBRUK-975 ALAMAIN-985 AND TRIPOLI -1327”Says the teacher with the microphone.We jump in the air like we have won a million dollars.After that it was home time and everyone went home.
The end!
Thursday, 24 October 2013
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