Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Monday, 31 October 2016

The child-Narrative story




The child.


It was a cold dark night in London,England, Tuesday the 16th of February 1991.There was a tall white skinny woman, She had mental problems due to abuse from her father she got as a child.The woman had a 2 year old daughter that she loved dearly with all of her heart but one day some people from the township thought that her daughter should be taken away from her due to her mental problems but the mother did not want her child to be taken to the orphanage because they treated their children horrendously there.
So the mother left the child at a doorstep like every other mother or father would to abandon their child but as she left the child awoke and followed the mother until she could not see her anymore.The young child fell to the ground and started to cry, little did she know she was right
outside the house her mother and father lived in.After a while the young child stopped crying and realized where she was.But something wasn't right, something was off about the house, the young girl slowly crawled into the house.There was a note on the ground with blood and tears smeared on the edge. “Dear Margaret, I'm so dearly sorry but I can not cope with your needs.You have become too much for me to handle.I have gone away and I am never coming back, look after our daughter. Love Scott,” The young girl thought to herself “I don't know what any of this means all I know are the names Margaret and Scott.My parents would call eachother those things all the time.I wonder what they mean”.The young child crawled up the narrow creaky stairs and into the bathroom, and saw her mother.The young girl thought to herself “Oh mummy is trying to learn to fly again”. The tall skinny woman was hanging from the ceiling with the rope tied around her neck.”I'll try find daddy,mummy stay right here don't go anywhere, I'll be right back” said the young girl.The young girl slowly crawled into her room where she found her stuffed rabbit, “His name was Carrot but for some reason on the side of Carrot was a name it said “Sophia” I think that's my name”Said Sophia.Sophia dragged her stuffed rabbit with her as she slowly crawled down the stairs into the kitchen.”DADDY!”Sophia yelled.No reply.”He masnt be home,well im just going to have a sleep” thought Sophia.Sophia slowly crawled up the stairs and back into her room and jumped into bed and slowly fell asleep.

Suddenly, young Sophia awoke to a cold breeze coming from the tall narrow doorway.She jumped out of her bed and started to follow the wind down into the living room.It was silent and the wind stopped blowing.It was just cold and silent.Suddenly a bang comingfrom the ground.Sophia almost had a heart attack but that wasnt what she was worried about. “Where did that come from?” thought young Sophia to herself.She layed down on the cold wooden floors and waited for the next bang.BANG!.Sophia moved closer to the bang, then again.BANG!.Then again Sophia moved closer.BANG!But this time Sophia moved closer and CRASH!She fell through the floor but she didn't fall onto the ground, something caught her.A tall white skinny figure.Sophia opened her eyes and looked at the figure and smiled.Somehow the figure was familiar to little Sophia.The spirit of some kind carried her down into the basement that was opened by Sophia and no one saw her again until years later, 25 years later to be exact.

TO BE CONTINUED....

Wednesday, 8 June 2016

Reading for pleasure Writing for Leisure


WALT:Make a title page related to  this terms inquiry topic

Today in class we had to make a title page all about our inquiry topic for this term.

Please give feedback and feedforward

Thankyou for reading :)

Tuesday, 10 May 2016

Inquiry Topic T2


WALT:Make a title page that shows our inquiry topic for this term.

Today I have made a title page that answers the question "What makes good readers and writers?".
But I still have a whole term of learning ahead of me so by the end of the term I will have a better description of what makes good readers and writers.

Please give feedback and feedforward.

Thankyou for reading.

Friday, 26 February 2016

Color emotion poems

Emotion Poems


Red Poem
Love is red
Love taste like strawberries and chocolate
Love smells like hot chocolate
Love looks like trust
Love sounds like I love you

Love feels like butterflies in your heart

Innocent is the colour white
Innocence taste like water
Innocence smells like flowers
Innocence looks simple
Innocence sounds like quiet
Innocence feels like being an angel on earth

Friday, 23 October 2015

Speech reflection


WALT:reflect on our feedback given to us by our teacher.
 I have reflected on my speech with the help of some feedback and feed forward.
Please give feedback and feedforward.
Thanks for reading.
Bye bye. :)

Monday, 13 May 2013

Turning Solid to Liquid to Solid experiment

How to turn Solid to Liquid to Solid
Our experiment was aiming to turn something from soild to liquid to solid.
  • (What we needed for this experiment)
  • Water
  • ice block sticks
  • cups
  • wooden spoons
  • Raro
  • Jug


Our instructions:

step one ........
  • open the raro packet,

    step two......
  • Pour the raro into the water jug.

    step three....
  • add the water to the water jug.

    step four.....
  • use the wooden spoon to mix the water and raro into is dissolves.

     step five.....

  • Pur the liquid into the cups.
step six.........

  • put the ice block stick
s into the cups.

step seven......
  • Carefully put the  cups into the freezer.

    step eight......

  • .wait until  it has turned solid

    then you can eat your ice block!


Conclusion:

When you  put the liquid into the freezer the cold temperature  turns it into a solid


Friday, 26 October 2012

Hydropower diagram


WAL about different power sources (where we get power from), and whether they are renewable or non-renewable:

Renewable (will not run out) energy source:Water,Solar,Wind,biomass,geothermal.

Non-renewable (will run out) energy source:Oil,Natural gas,Coal


This is how Water is used to generate (make) power:






saw the final chapte





Wednesday, 29 August 2012

Kiwi Facts

WAL facts about kiwis for our report writing

Interesting facts
  • A bird that can’t fly
  • The kiwi is the smallest living member of the ratite family, a group of flightless birds which includes rheas, ostriches, emu and the extinct NZ moa.
  • Kiwis have no tail, and stubby, two inch wings that are usually covered by their coarse, bristly, hair-like feathers. These wings are pretty much useless. .
  • Kiwis live in burrows in the ground and is largely nocturnal. 
  • The kiwis body temperature is 38° Celcius, lower than most other birds. 



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