Kia ora Petra, that was great work, your superhero has very positive key words and important key words, next time I think you could check your work before you publish, but typos happen, e.g superhero/ But excellent descriptive writing, keep up the good work! :D
Well done Petra. I agree with Raena- but well done for choosing a superhero that also looks after the environment. I can see you bringing your learning from last year into this year (Tagata O Le Moana). Keep it up :)
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Kia ora Petra, that was great work, your superhero has very positive key words and important key words, next time I think you could check your work before you publish, but typos happen, e.g superhero/ But excellent descriptive writing, keep up the good work! :D
Well done Petra. I agree with Raena- but well done for choosing a superhero that also looks after the environment. I can see you bringing your learning from last year into this year (Tagata O Le Moana). Keep it up :)
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