I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Ms Aireen.
Friday, 13 December 2013
Monday, 2 December 2013
Tuesday, 26 November 2013
Friday, 22 November 2013
Thursday, 21 November 2013
Under The Bed - Penny Trzynka
This is my poem of the week for this week, it is called Under The Bed. I put 4 pictures for you to view and enjoy, I hope you like my poem of the week. I also give credit to Penny Trzynka for making this poem it is really interesting and our whole class loves it especially me.
Friday, 15 November 2013
Thursday, 14 November 2013
Spelling 14.11.13
My spelling words for this week is balloon, forget, married, shell, bunch, hid, oats, steel, common, internet, pond, track, eastern, key, roar and win.
Friday, 8 November 2013
Volcano narritve
Choose a picture from the following, and write a narrative story about it.
Use this picture to create a narrative story.
Remember:
- Figurative Language
- Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
- Structure (O, P, S, R)
- Precise (interesting) words
- Speaking parts between characters
- Character and Setting descriptions!
Start here:
Once,In 1923 ireland on a sunny day there were two explorers that would explore asleep volcanoes there names were zelda and vincent they were brother and sister they both had dark green eyes and light brown hair.Their parents died in a volcano they were volcano explorers too.
But one day they went to a volcano the volcano of the Red crystal it was where there parents died and they wanted to finish off their mission for them but they knew it wouldn't be easy it is completely full of bobytraps. But their parents found a map to a secret passageway and gave it to their children.
But little did they know the volcano was going to erupt they fought through old rocks vines but by the time they got to the crystal it erupted rocks fell on the door and before they got crushed they saw their parents skeletons and boom rocks fall on top of them and that was the end of them.
Thursday, 7 November 2013
Friday, 1 November 2013
halloween
Halloween House
In the United Kingdom, England,1923 there was a girl named Rosey she had long black hair and dark green eyes she would always walk past a scary grey house with half ripped paint and boarded up windows and rats climbing up the walls and a scary garage that would always open in the night but no one would come out and no lights went on.
She would always wanted to go in and have a look but fear always drove her away.
But on one sunny day her and her friends went to go to the house to have a look at what lied in there waiting.But as soon as as they got to the door the garage slammed! closed and everybody but rosey ran away.Fear runs up her body like it was trying to take over her body.
But when she got in there it was a fake house there was a dog playing with the remote.
When she picked up the brown little puppy it licked her face and they went home and they never went back.
THE END
Wednesday, 30 October 2013
Tsunami Narritive
Start here:Once, it was a bright and sunny day in the town of bangkok.Where it was calm and nobody was yelling or anything but with no warning there was a big BANG!.It was a EARTHQUAKE!!Everybody felt it but that was not the end.With no warning there was huge wave coming straight for the city. “Ahhhhhh,RUUUUUUUUUU NNNNNN I want my mummy” Cried a little child in Anger.
Men and women praying in front of the wave for Persitan the God of the see to help them in there time of pain.
But it was too late...They have been swept away from their loving city.No survivors.Just a pool of water surounding the city that once was calm and collected but now was just a pool of lives lost.Anger why must this happen to this poor city?
The End!
Tuesday, 29 October 2013
Friday, 25 October 2013
Amazing Win by Petra
Amazing Win
Once,I was in my Gazebo.Trembling in fear,People screaming in excitement,But that was just a background.Watching one of the teachers with two blocks in her hands ready to crash them together.Children,In lines waiting for the sound of the two blocks smashed together which will let them go free.SMASH!
Off the children go Sprinting to be the one to win.
The children at the front get tired and they slow down.
The tiny little kid at the back Sprinted to the front of the fast people and
BOOM! He has won.Kids silent and with excitement everybody started to clap.
A tornado,Drifting in my stomach round and round and my stomach goes BANG! When I hear one of the teacher’s calling “ALL THE 9 YEAR OLD GIRLS TO THE STARTING LINE”.Shaking,It was hard to walk.Lining up
at the starting line.Staring at the finish line.I could hear my heart beating as fast as a bee.Bang!,Off we go,Sprinting as fast as the wind.
This race is different everybody is sprinting but nobody was slowing down in the front but I came fifth place.I wait for the finals
to finish and it was time for the points to see witch house won.
“BENGHAZI -867 TUBRUK-975 ALAMAIN-985 AND TRIPOLI -1327”Says the teacher with the microphone.We jump in the air like we have won a million dollars.After that it was home time and everyone went home.
The end!
Thursday, 24 October 2013
Wednesday, 23 October 2013
Tuesday, 22 October 2013
Monday, 21 October 2013
Friday, 18 October 2013
Thursday, 17 October 2013
Friday, 27 September 2013
Thursday, 26 September 2013
Tuesday, 24 September 2013
Friday, 20 September 2013
Spelling T3 W8
Today I have played flogger jump and you are suppose to find the right letters and put them in the right order |
Friday, 13 September 2013
Tuesday, 10 September 2013
Friday, 6 September 2013
Thursday, 5 September 2013
Tuesday, 3 September 2013
Monday, 2 September 2013
Friday, 30 August 2013
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