Volcano narritve

Choose a picture from the following, and write a narrative story about it.

Use this picture to create a narrative story.

Remember:

• Figurative Language
• Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
• Structure (O, P, S, R)
• Precise (interesting) words
• Speaking parts between characters
• Character and Setting descriptions!

Start here:

Once,In 1923 ireland on a sunny day there were two explorers that would explore asleep volcanoes there names were zelda and vincent they were brother and sister they both had dark green eyes and light brown hair.Their parents died in a volcano they were volcano explorers too.

But one day they went to a volcano the volcano of the Red crystal it was where there parents died and they wanted to finish off their mission for them but they knew it wouldn't be easy it is completely full of bobytraps. But their parents found a map  to a secret passageway and gave it to their children.

But little did they know the volcano was going to erupt they fought through old rocks vines but by the time they got to the crystal it erupted rocks fell on the door and before they got crushed they saw their parents skeletons and boom rocks fall on top of them and that was the end of them.