Monday 31 October 2016

Chubba Chubbs Adventure-Narrative Writing

Chubba Chubbs Adventure.
Swings soaring side to side.The ladders reaching from one tree to another monkey bars reaching over into treehouse to treehouse.A young monkey named Chubba Chub once lived in a village of monkeys up high inside of the trees.The trees were right next to a waterfall which was perfect for little monkeys like Chubba to play in and to get fresh water from.You could hear animals from this end of the forest to that end.If you listen to the left side of the jungle you can hear ¨Tweet tweet tweet¨.If you listen to the right side of the jungle you cand hear ¨Raaaawwwrrrrr¨.But if you listen right here you can hear something magnificent.¨CHUBBA! GET UP IT'S MIDDAY!¨Your mum yelling at you to get out of bed.¨Ahhhh yes mama¨ Says chubba rubbing his eyes as he swings of his bed.Chubba swings over to the kitchen to have some breakfast.¨I made your favorite chubba, Banana porridge!Says mummy monkey as she lays a bowl of her famous banana porridge on the table.¨Yayyyy, Thanks mum.¨ said chubba running to the table.¨Yumm,I wonder if billy bear is home¨Chubba said to himself.After breakfast chubba put his plate up on the bench and slid down to the waterfall where him and his friends usually met up.No one was there so he sat down with his feet in the water and closed his eyes and listen to the things around him.The trees sang beautiful melodys as the wind blew softly into the trees.The sun gazed down on chubba as if it was god himself.

Chubba got bored of waiting his friends to join him so he stood up and went for a walk down and around the trees up a hill and under three bridges.It started to get dark so chubba decided to go back home.He went through trees past a huge rock and over a long river.Chubba didn't know where he was.He was lost, ¨Ohh noo!Where do I go?¨ Chubba sobbed.He sat down right next to a tree and started to cry. Suddenly I hear something coming up behind me, “THUMP,THUMP, THUMP,THUMP”.”WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE”Growled a big dark shadow.”I..I..I’m L...Lost”Said chubba quivering from head to toe.   
TO BE CONTINUED.

Please give feedback and feedforward.
Thankyou for reading.

No comments:

Post a Comment