I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Ms Aireen.
Tuesday, 26 November 2013
Friday, 22 November 2013
Thursday, 21 November 2013
Under The Bed - Penny Trzynka
This is my poem of the week for this week, it is called Under The Bed. I put 4 pictures for you to view and enjoy, I hope you like my poem of the week. I also give credit to Penny Trzynka for making this poem it is really interesting and our whole class loves it especially me.
Friday, 15 November 2013
Thursday, 14 November 2013
Spelling 14.11.13
My spelling words for this week is balloon, forget, married, shell, bunch, hid, oats, steel, common, internet, pond, track, eastern, key, roar and win.
Friday, 8 November 2013
Volcano narritve
Choose a picture from the following, and write a narrative story about it.
Use this picture to create a narrative story.
Remember:
- Figurative Language
- Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
- Structure (O, P, S, R)
- Precise (interesting) words
- Speaking parts between characters
- Character and Setting descriptions!
Start here:
Once,In 1923 ireland on a sunny day there were two explorers that would explore asleep volcanoes there names were zelda and vincent they were brother and sister they both had dark green eyes and light brown hair.Their parents died in a volcano they were volcano explorers too.
But one day they went to a volcano the volcano of the Red crystal it was where there parents died and they wanted to finish off their mission for them but they knew it wouldn't be easy it is completely full of bobytraps. But their parents found a map to a secret passageway and gave it to their children.
But little did they know the volcano was going to erupt they fought through old rocks vines but by the time they got to the crystal it erupted rocks fell on the door and before they got crushed they saw their parents skeletons and boom rocks fall on top of them and that was the end of them.
Thursday, 7 November 2013
Friday, 1 November 2013
halloween
Halloween House
In the United Kingdom, England,1923 there was a girl named Rosey she had long black hair and dark green eyes she would always walk past a scary grey house with half ripped paint and boarded up windows and rats climbing up the walls and a scary garage that would always open in the night but no one would come out and no lights went on.
She would always wanted to go in and have a look but fear always drove her away.
But on one sunny day her and her friends went to go to the house to have a look at what lied in there waiting.But as soon as as they got to the door the garage slammed! closed and everybody but rosey ran away.Fear runs up her body like it was trying to take over her body.
But when she got in there it was a fake house there was a dog playing with the remote.
When she picked up the brown little puppy it licked her face and they went home and they never went back.
THE END
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