Chubba Chubbs Adventure-Narrative Writing

Chubba Chubbs Adventure.

Swings soaring side to side.The ladders reaching from one tree to another monkey bars reaching over into treehouse to treehouse.A young monkey named Chubba Chub once lived in a village of monkeys up high inside of the trees.The trees were right next to a waterfall which was perfect for little monkeys like Chubba to play in and to get fresh water from.You could hear animals from this end of the forest to that end.If you listen to the left side of the jungle you can hear ¨Tweet tweet tweet¨.If you listen to the right side of the jungle you cand hear ¨Raaaawwwrrrrr¨.But if you listen right here you can hear something magnificent.¨CHUBBA! GET UP IT'S MIDDAY!¨Your mum yelling at you to get out of bed.¨Ahhhh yes mama¨ Says chubba rubbing his eyes as he swings of his bed.Chubba swings over to the kitchen to have some breakfast.¨I made your favorite chubba, Banana porridge!Says mummy monkey as she lays a bowl of her famous banana porridge on the table.¨Yayyyy, Thanks mum.¨ said chubba running to the table.¨Yumm,I wonder if billy bear is home¨Chubba said to himself.After breakfast chubba put his plate up on the bench and slid down to the waterfall where him and his friends usually met up.No one was there so he sat down with his feet in the water and closed his eyes and listen to the things around him.The trees sang beautiful melodys as the wind blew softly into the trees.The sun gazed down on chubba as if it was god himself.

Chubba got bored of waiting his friends to join him so he stood up and went for a walk down and around the trees up a hill and under three bridges.It started to get dark so chubba decided to go back home.He went through trees past a huge rock and over a long river.Chubba didn't know where he was.He was lost, ¨Ohh noo!Where do I go?¨ Chubba sobbed.He sat down right next to a tree and started to cry. Suddenly I hear something coming up behind me, “THUMP,THUMP, THUMP,THUMP”.”WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE”Growled a big dark shadow.”I..I..I’m L...Lost”Said chubba quivering from head to toe.   

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The child-Narrative story

The child.


It was a cold dark night in London,England, Tuesday the 16th of February 1991.There was a tall white skinny woman, She had mental problems due to abuse from her father she got as a child.The woman had a 2 year old daughter that she loved dearly with all of her heart but one day some people from the township thought that her daughter should be taken away from her due to her mental problems but the mother did not want her child to be taken to the orphanage because they treated their children horrendously there.
So the mother left the child at a doorstep like every other mother or father would to abandon their child but as she left the child awoke and followed the mother until she could not see her anymore.The young child fell to the ground and started to cry, little did she know she was right outside the house her mother and father lived in.After a while the young child stopped crying and realized where she was.But something wasn't right, something was off about the house, the young girl slowly crawled into the house.There was a note on the ground with blood and tears smeared on the edge. “Dear Margaret, I'm so dearly sorry but I can not cope with your needs.You have become too much for me to handle.I have gone away and I am never coming back, look after our daughter. Love Scott,” The young girl thought to herself “I don't know what any of this means all I know are the names Margaret and Scott.My parents would call eachother those things all the time.I wonder what they mean”.The young child crawled up the narrow creaky stairs and into the bathroom, and saw her mother.The young girl thought to herself “Oh mummy is trying to learn to fly again”. The tall skinny woman was hanging from the ceiling with the rope tied around her neck.”I'll try find daddy,mummy stay right here don't go anywhere, I'll be right back” said the young girl.The young girl slowly crawled into her room where she found her stuffed rabbit, “His name was Carrot but for some reason on the side of Carrot was a name it said “Sophia” I think that's my name”Said Sophia.Sophia dragged her stuffed rabbit with her as she slowly crawled down the stairs into the kitchen.”DADDY!”Sophia yelled.No reply.”He masnt be home,well im just going to have a sleep” thought Sophia.Sophia slowly crawled up the stairs and back into her room and jumped into bed and slowly fell asleep.

Suddenly, young Sophia awoke to a cold breeze coming from the tall narrow doorway.She jumped out of her bed and started to follow the wind down into the living room.It was silent and the wind stopped blowing.It was just cold and silent.Suddenly a bang comingfrom the ground.Sophia almost had a heart attack but that wasnt what she was worried about. “Where did that come from?” thought young Sophia to herself.She layed down on the cold wooden floors and waited for the next bang.BANG!.Sophia moved closer to the bang, then again.BANG!.Then again Sophia moved closer.BANG!But this time Sophia moved closer and CRASH!She fell through the floor but she didn't fall onto the ground, something caught her.A tall white skinny figure.Sophia opened her eyes and looked at the figure and smiled.Somehow the figure was familiar to little Sophia.The spirit of some kind carried her down into the basement that was opened by Sophia and no one saw her again until years later, 25 years later to be exact.

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Keydens Fairytale

Keydens Fairytale.
One night, A boy named Keyden went on a road trip with his Mum,Dad and his little sister. It was raining down hard onto the cold narrow road.The dad was telling the children about all the adventures he went on with his mum and dad as a child.When the father was a child they went around the whole of America from Mexico to all the to the top of North Dakota.The father forgot to focus on the road because he was so pulled into his stories.Suddenly they heard a truck. HONK! HONK!  The father looked at the road.There was a truck right in front of them, he took a sharp turn a swerved down a hill into a tree.CRASH!.Young Keyden crawled out of the car but when he looked in he could not see him parents just his little sister Luisa in the back.The car was about to explode so he had to act quickly.He tried to unbuckle her seatbelt but it wouldn't budge he looked everywhere for something to cut the belt with, it took him a little while but he grabbed a rock and through it at the windshield and grabbed a piece of glass he cut harder and harder into the belt.The fire was getting closer.The belt snapped, Keyden quickly grabbed her.He could feel his heart pounding. Boom. Boom. Boom. He sprinted as far as he could away from the car.BOOOOMMMM!!!.The car exploded sending the two children falling to the ground.They both got knocked out on the way to the ground.Darkness sets in.
He could hear crying all around him.He opened his eyes.Blurr.His eyes started to focus.It was his sister, he jumped up and started hugging her. “We got to find mum and dad”he said in a kind and sympathetic voice.He lifted Luisa up and onto his back. “Argh” Said Keyden in a quiet voice.He looked at his hands, the glass Keyden used to cut the belt cut into his hand almost to the bone.He ripped some cloth from his shirt and tied it around his hand.Luisa eventually fell asleep on his back.Keyden slowly creeped through the mists of the freezing cold forest.Looking far and wide for his parents.The sun creeped down to the other side of the earth and the moon came out to greet us.TO BE CONTINUED.

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